OUGD505 - Studio Brief 01 - Peer Feedback

• Pixelated background works well to convey concepts, but distorts text quite a bit - makes it hard to read - try changing the background to a more solid colour or make text slightly bigger.
• Make colours less dark perhaps.
• Floppy disks seem less purposeful than the bubblegum - bubblegum is something people would interact with more and is a more creative idea.
• Floppy disk designs work well though to convey meanings.
• Vaporwave has been explained properly - lots of connections to the genre displayed in the outcomes - done well to convey issues of society concerned with vaporwave.
• Bubblegum normally has perforated middle - think about ease of use.
• Designs work really well in context - purposeful.
• Clever idea adding changes to the nutritional information to show what makes up a vaporwave music track.