Positive
-
‘Stamped’ name has a strong link.
- GIF is super strong.
-
Like the receipt idea with the stamp concept.
-
Receipt idea has a good sense of humour, but has been done before and the link
to the exhibition is a little weak.
-
Strong colour palette.
-
Good GIF - use peoples work as the images.
- GIF
has a strong idea behind it, links to print (Stamped).
Negative
-
Receipt and GIF share no visual language.
-
Receipts are not stamped they are printed.
-
Typeface for ‘stamped’ is too sporty.
- No
relevance of receipt.
-
Still quite basic and needs a lot more work.
Suggestions
-
Softer typeface.
-
Apply a tighter kerning.
-
STAMPD -
STAMPT.
- ’S’
on its own, doesn't need a shadow.
- Use
different photos to spell stamped for the logo.
-
Create the logo as Stamp.
-
Focus on the media used of the GIF, apply the idea behind the GIF to the whole
work, using peoples work for the background of each letter.
Comments
-
Looks like an american varsity logo.
-
Looks american variety style.
-
Stamped needs to be tied into the works, doesn't say ‘art exhibition’.
No comments:
Post a Comment